Questions
1. MC had a secret crush in High School but surprisingly met his crush again in college. He also becomes a money-spender when drunk, I believe.
2. MC can predict the future, I believe through dreams, and creates a misunderstanding thanks to a car accident the he had a vision of, making the lead think MC is actually trying to flirt, rather than prevent the car accident.
Hey guys! So recently I’ve been thinking about this really old Free!! Dj i read forever ago and it was a Makoto X Haru dj where Makoto was kinda psycho? And like, locked Haru up with an ankle chain? I really can’t remember much more than that but if anyone knows what it is it’ll be greatly appreciated!!!!!
there’s a bl manhwa I’ve read and can’t remember the title of, here’s what I vaguely remember:
- in a game, can’t log out
- He’s been in the game before, and he stoped playing
- In a vr pod thing
- The emperor? Top was upset once he (bottom) disappeared and found a substitute
- Multiple tops obsessed
- Locked in room
- Escapes and with help from someone who can change appearance (the substitute)
- Brings the substitute on his side by saying he can tell him his real name?
- Once outside, he finds a knight? Or something and he gets a quest from him
- Tried to khs? to log out
- Couldn’t log out in the end and escaped with new identity
- One of the tops found him and followed him to an island
- Despite not knowing it’s him, falls in love again
- Another top comes along and recognizes him immediately
- A chat appeared to try and help
- People outside of the game had realized the problem and is trying to help
- Becomes a knight??
Thanks for the help!!
I wish story writing was better in manga and comics.. I think a lot of artists rely on their art to do the heavy lifting, but never use any story devices which sells the characters more. It’s honestly become an iconic style of writing, the characters are unreal and it’s related heavily to manga now.. however there are so many simple techniques they could use, without having to change anything they’re doing. If characters kiss less often, it makes when they do more impactful. Instead of there being “the kiss” in many kisses, it’s “the kiss” through a long couple chapters of tension. Tears, I think tears are used terribly now, they’re far more impactful if a man sheds them, or if they’re only used in extremely impactful situations. Far too commonly are they used in sappy love scenes, or after the tension is dissolved. I’m just nitpicking but you get the idea… I wish manga had more variety in it’s writing, and the writers did more research, they’d end up having to do less with their art too, more impactful scenes and less crazy buildup.
I think generally a lot of mangas in one way or another fail to do this? A lot of Korean manga more-so. Netkama punch spurred this tangent, but I think sooo many manga have really poor stories being carried by the art, instead of using plot to create impact they use lots of flowery images which is fine but if it’s the billionth time this has happened it’s incredibly lacking. I think also “everything under the baby’s feet” when he was standing up to his dad. if he cried or his father recognized that his child is legitimately afraid of him I think the scene would’ve been more impactful. Alas we can’t always get what we want, but it’s things like this that I wish artists would look at more yknow? every scene tells a story, so every scene should be treated like it’s the most special.
Feeds
In any case, it has a relatively boring and mediocre start that accelerates really well, imo. It’s worth following along for what is clearly a good understanding of what makes scenes and dialogue interesting
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All his life,“ BECAUSE HE WAS
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I mean, I know A LOT of people who does that and only blames the guy hurting them when they were also at fault for choosing to stay even after an intervention dafuq
MOTHER MINGWA I HAVE TO SET EXTRA SESSION W MY THERAPIST FOR THIS :')))))
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Her tried to get the siblings together?!??! What the hell?!!!(⊙…⊙ )
I could relate to the seme, the not wanting to commit cuz u feel u aren't worthy, I know how that feels
That chief should be sent to mental asylum bruh
I love both families, the brother is an idiot but he is a good brother